I deny the notion,
no, the idea,
concept,
thought,
that your heart was ever mine to break.
I’ll put it simply, but not kindly.
I deny your touch,
I deny the push of your lips against mine
and the feel of your hands on my hips.
I deny the utterance of the words “I love…”
No,
you’ll feel your lies jilted by my fingertips,
the way you stilled my cries.
Hush hush
“your sorrow is not for today”
but there never came a tomorrow.
Here’s the catch,
the key I hold to the lock,
you didn’t see.
It’s in my hand,
it’s forming these letters to sculpt these words
and create this poetry.
In short, I’ll put it simply, but again, not kindly.
I’m a writer, bitch,
you can’t hush me.
Hey everyone!
Here is my response to the word prompt Deny over at The Daily Post. I almost didn’t post it, but if I want to use this blog to get writing down and out I can’t be fussing over things not being just as I like them. Some things need to be on and of the moment and if I look back at them and cringe then meh, so be it. I never tried to fool anyone into thinking I was perfect. I am perfect though…look into my eyes…peeerrrrfeeecc….no? Damnit! I knew I should have stayed in magician school!
I’ve seen Grabbety Covens’ response to this (which is great) and I’m hoping to see some more!
Great stuff
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Hey Alex! Thanks! 😄
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That was spectacular! I must have been high…on what, I don’t know when I published that garbage to start with this morning. I thought your post was amazing! I love your style of writing!!!
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I think I must have read it after it had been edited or something because when I saw your sorry post I was so confused! It looked awesome to me! And thank you so much! 😄💖
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Oh, the original looked like a jumbled up scrabble board game…disorganized, big time.
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I….like…..A LOT!! More of this wonderful , biting, painful, victorious poetry please. Thank you
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Thank you! It’s all I ever seem to write with poetry and I worry about sounding like I have all the angst! 😂 I like that you like because I like you A LOT! 😋😗
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Loved up ❤❤❤
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Darling, this was so sexy! I think you might be on to something!
That slap at the end almost knocked me down, but then I just felt all kinds of delicious tingles!
Yummy post!😍
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Aight, being called darling by you was worth all the worries with posting this! 😍😘
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😄💖
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Sassy and classy! Love it! 😃💛
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Thanks, Walt! Gotta love being called sassy and classy! 🎩😄❤
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Brilliant, beautiful and perfect. 🙂
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Can’t believe this… Even on my own posts I mess up my replies to you and reply to myself. *ahem* I saaaaiiiddd: Thank you, Ward! Always makes me happy to see your encouraging comments. 😄💖
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Don’t be flustered. I’m just a person, lol. 😉
I’m always happy to see anything from you. 😊
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You didn’t have to to stay at that school, you’ve already got the magical touch, a peeeerfeeeect poem, through my eyes…… you hypnotise…..
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But I really like the uniforms! 😉Thank you, Ivor! 💖
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Amazing response Arbie, so many emotions portrayed with this poetic piece!
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Yay! I was hoping you’d appear. I can’t find the comment where you gave me your twitter handle for the word prompts. Do you mind posting it here? And thank you so much for your kind words! 😊💖
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No Problem, always my pleasure to visit! here is my prompt account handle @Soulsoulwords and this is my regular handle @follownehamba
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This is absolutely a winner…truly enchanting ❤❤
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Thank you!! 😄💖
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You wrote this from a prompt!!! (falls off chair). Your writing is exciting and where is the “follow” button on this page…!!
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I didn’t, Arbus did! Ahaha 😂😄 Thank you so much! I’ve since moved it to the top so thanks for making me aware it was lurking in the murky depths! 😙
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Arbus is something else!! 😁Have an awesome weekend 😊
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