Under an unknown sky I waited
to press my body against yours
beneath the moonlight you claim to adore
Watching for your eyes to meet mine
and see all of me
not afraid to be taken in your arms
because mine will push you down with more ferocity
than you thought me capable
You’ll tell me you didn’t think sex could be like that
that you could be held like that
kissed like that
or that a woman could love like that
I’d feel like I’m the one your mother warned you about
not because I would break your heart
but that I would capture it in a vice like grip
and I’d be the girl to say I do
I’d remember what it was to sleep at night
to rest my eyes without need to dream
because you would be my tomorrow
While in another place you’d take me for granted
forgetting that one day I’ll wake
and how secrets fear the dark
You thought to tame me was to have me say I love you
that those words would mean all sins forgiven
but you don’t fuck like that
kiss like that
hold like that
or love like that
when you’ve been brought to your knees, unwilling
You’ll learn you cannot tame a storm
or shield your eyes from the fire
when its lightning crashes down in front of you
When its rain pours down outside your window
and the same moon shines shadows into your night
a silhouette in its light
and a memory of my body moving upon yours
will be all that’s left
because even in our midnight
you never learned
what it meant
to love a woman like that
Hey everyone!
Here is my response to The Daily Post’s prompt Tame. I wanted to do something for this one but I fell asleep and so put something together a little late. But in some places it’s still the right day! Eheheheh. This one might be a little rough around the edges but by George it’s something and better than me thumb twiddling.
Thank you for reading! I’m going to go back to bed now and, uh, most likely twiddle my thumbs! Night night!
It’s a wonder how love can mean so many things to so many people. Bliss to broken.
Very well written.
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It is! And thank you so much. Loved your addition to The Perfectly Imperfect Bunch!
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Thank you kindly. 🙂
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Sounded very good to me! Sleep well
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Eep! Thank you! 🙂
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The first part of this was amazing, something maybe found along the road of fire and gold and magic… but then the second part came and it was just crushing. I know it’s a prompt, but I certainly hope no one ever actually treats you like that, takes you for granted, gets you to say something and then leaves. I would be very cross with them indeed. 🙂
Anyway, this was actually amazing, not at all something that seemed just thrown together in your sleep.
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Agree with the CLEVER man!
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I’m glad when you agree with me, because then it means I’m right.
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Wow! Smooth!
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😉
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Can’t tell you how much I love that line of yours! “Fire and gold and magic” aaaaah. Put it in everything! There’s certainly truth in every prompt I respond to! I was about to put a smiley emoji but now I wish there was a smiley emoji that slowly turned into a ruh roh maybe not smiling moment emoji aha.
And thank you! I just needed that line, you know? The one that sets everything else off. When I’d first thought of responding to tame earlier in the day it wasn’t like this, probably why nothing came. Bloody useless muse. Tell ya, it’d be out on the street if it didn’t come in handy sometimes!
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That muse, or those muses… because some of my muses are demons…
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Arbie, I’m so blown away by you! So loving the hands on your hips and that sexy strut!
She says with a breathe sigh wanting more of this nectar!😍
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Mel!! Sodding WP put you in spam! I am not impressed! So sorry I’m late replying!! 😭 Thank you so much. You know I saw a TED talk said putting your hands on your hips actually makes you feel more empowered. I tried it the other day and felt like wonder woman… In a kitchen… Waiting for the kettle to boil. But hey, it worked! 😂 ❤❤❤❤
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You’re adorable! Easily one of my favorite people! 😘
Yep… I find comments in spam quite a bit! 😒
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I knew you had it in you! Loved every thought, every word. I am so proud of you right now. 😃💛
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Yay! I’m so glad! That means a lot, Walt. Thank you! 😀 xx
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Your not so tame poem, is wildly captivating.
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Ahaha, Ivor, nice one! And I’m glad! That’s a really great word to see used in response to it. Thank you!
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Sensual and heart breaking. Like kissing someone and holding them while crying your eyes out . When you could die in that moment.
You got me good with this one ❤
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Pretty much sums up my summer! What a messy time that was. And aaaah, I remember that post. So good. 🙂 Not sure a smiling emoji is the right one for this, not sure my laptop will let me do a heart. ❤ It does! Rejoice!
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Chuckle…
It’s all experiences. Anything that makes our hearts and minds pour out words like that , adds to who we are.
Or something.
❤💋
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I thoroughly enjoyed this beautifully written moment of turmoil!! Fabulous work!!
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Thank you so much, Grabbety! ❤
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Really loved this poem! Such amazing imagery mixed with the powerful words of passion make this really stand out. It shows an extremely strong sense of ones own character by portraying such lustful and intimate moments. Once again please continue blessing us with such creative and innovative works of art. Your talent is beyond extraordinary!
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Oh, you! You know I’m better at baking, and I’m rubbish at that, so as for this… 😂😋 Thank you though. 😚🌷
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This was sensational in so many levels…I pray that you are never treated as ordinary or even taken for granted😊
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Aaah this is in response to it actually happening! But we pick ourselves up don’t we? Thank you for your comment! Love seeing you around! 😄❤
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