Lightly upon wilted pastures,
footsteps fled, a child from capture
flash of gold, a setting sun
as behind her, seekers run
Following a laughter sounded
while gentle echoes of hearts pounded
over cattle grazed earth she led
a chase of siblings to thorns of roses red
An elder to stop, a younger to run
for in victory, she cried, “I have won!”
but the wind did sweep her further still
and until
through and into woodland she would find
the hunter to her prey left behind
Her pride swelled deep
and this victory she would keep
as further into forest she would wind
and from her head, falling fast, a fairy twine
All while other side of Petal’s Gate
a brother feared his sister’s fate
eyes glanced down
hovered over entrance of the Other’s crown
Where daisies trampled ‘neath hurried feet
led where the sun dared never meet
the only land wild roses grow
the place where hatreds seed would sow
Where heartbeat pounded, now it trembled
as his mother’s stories he remembered
a folk all knowing, yet unknown by lore
a path unshown, yet showing once more
When jolted forth from thoughts he hears
a warning danger grows ever near
his sister’s scream, travelled fast and far
from within the Forest of the Fallen Star
NOTE: In trying to write a poem I decided to write one that loosely tells the beginning of a book I’m working on. Not going to write anything else here, will be rambling about it tomorrow, I’m sure.
Arbie X
Wonderfully poetic Arbie, and I loved your dramatic finale stanza…
“When jolted forth from thoughts he hears
a warning danger grows ever near
his sister’s scream, travelled fast and far
from within the Forest of the Fallen Star”
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Thank you! I was hoping that finale would work so it made me happy that you’ve mentioned it!
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Great work!
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Hey! Great to see you here! Thank you so much for the positive comment!
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You’re welcome.
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A lovely mixture of charm and suspense.
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Thank you! Those two words sum up nicely what I was working towards!
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